Sunday, February 22, 2015

THE ROBOT!!!

One time I was a sleep and I had a dream about a ROBOT!!! I as at the piha playground with my friends and then we saw ROBOT and then we runned to Kieo's house because I't was the close to the park and then we made a plan how to destroy the ROBOT and 12 hours later we did it and this is a view off him in cartoon version 

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  1. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2015 at 10:00 PM

    What a crazy dream Cisco! I like how you have included the who, what and where in your story.

    You could expand on your story by telling your reader HOW you destroyed the robot.

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